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  1. page Poetic Devices edited ... Example : The bird of night. Theme - Theme is the general idea or insight about life that a w…
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    Example : The bird of night.
    Theme - Theme is the general idea or insight about life that a writer wishes to express.
    1. I have a million things to do today.
    Hyperbole
    Hannah’s home has heat hopefully.
    Alliteration
    That building is a little bit big and pretty ugly
    Oxymoron
    4. Carries cat clawed her couch, creating chaos.
    Alliteration
    The water is like the sun."
    Simile
    Praying to the porcelain altar
    Satire x
    I was so embarrassed, I thought I might die
    Hyperbole
    He has the heart of a lion
    Metaphor
    9.Health food makes me sick.
    Analogy x
    10.You are the sun in my sky
    x
    11.A host of golden daffodils; / Beside the lake, beneath the trees, / Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
    x
    12.His belt was a snake curling around his waist
    Personification x
    13.Sara’s seven sisters slept soundly in sand
    Alliteration
    Wardrobe malfunction
    15.We have to believe in free will. We have no choice
    16.Water, water, every where,
    And all the boards did shrink ;
    Water, water, every where,
    Nor any drop to drinkI w
    Alliteration and Repition x young at a ripe old age
    17.Collateral damage
    Allusion x
    18.Zachary zeroed in on zoo keeping.
    Alliteration
    Running faster than the speed of light.
    Hyperbole
    20.Continuous as the stars that shine / And twinkle on the milky way, / They stretched in never-ending line / Along the margin of a bay
    Rhyme x
    21.He was a man of great statue
    x
    We seem to have unleased a hornet's nest.
    x
    23. Red rooster says, "Cockadoodle do doo"
    Otomatopeia
    ... the moan of doves in immemorial elms,
    Personification x
    And murmuring of innumerable bees.
    Personification x
    A riverboat shall be my horse.
    Metaphor
    The police are not here to create disorder, they're here to preserve disorder.
    x
    28. O My Luve's like a red, red rose,
    x
    29. 'Tis hard to say, if greater Want of Skill
    Appear in Writing or in Judging ill,
    But, of the two, less dang'rous is th' Offence,
    To tire our Patience, than mis-lead our Sense
    Some few in that, but Numbers err in this,
    Ten Censure wrong for one who Writes amiss;
    A Fool might once himself alone expose,
    Now One in Verse makes many more in Prose. ... (1–8)
    Rhyme x
    Hockey is like reading
    You get into it and then you never
    want to stop
    Simile

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Wednesday, January 12

  1. page Novel Study Focus Assignment edited ... By Rory Christopher The name of this novel is Divine Madness, by Robert Muchamore. The plot o…
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    By Rory Christopher
    The name of this novel is Divine Madness, by Robert Muchamore. The plot outline for the story is, James Adams (the main character) is trying to infiltrate a secret association (The Survivors), connected to Help Earth (another secret organization, but is a bad organization, that is trying to destroy the world). The organization Help Earth, is a terrorist group that thinks, killing people/resources most people need to survive, will help the world, even if the people are always working full-time, or the resources are used every day. James is hoping, that he can find out whether or not Help Earth is linked to the Survivors.
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    complex, and
    The language is not very complex in most points of
    the book: Bad
    The story is easy to follow, and interesting : Good
    Transitions to
    transitions between different people in the bookscenes are sketchy: Bad
    Very detailed in most parts of
    very random and all-over the book: Good
    Very nice & interesting plot twists: Good
    Variety of different characters: Good
    Did
    place.
    Although
    the novel did not help youme in any way?
    No, this novel did not,
    aspect of life, it does not havewas a well written book, and the whole story is very well written. There was no main theme, or a moral. Nonemoral, which may have taught me something. But, also, none of the characters tryever really go in to teach anyone first handdetail about anything they are doing, or how to fix, clean, make, etc.fix or make anything. And since
    As
    the novel has no moral, message, or main theme, the book doesabove statement says, I did not have anything to teach you afterwards.
    Did you
    learn anything from the novel?
    Just like
    novel, as no one in the answer above, none ofbook teaches any one anything first-hand, and the characters try to teach anyone first hand how to fix, clean, make, etc. anything.
    What did you find most interesting?
    What
    book does not have a main theme, or moral.
    Something
    I find mostfound interesting is,in the novel, was the plot twists,twists. They were so complex, and distorted the characters. The plot twists distort the story, makingstory so much that, it harderwas almost impossible to solve. Which I love. The characters, are all different, even if just being in a small way.figure out what was going to happen next. But I would say it gives"spices up" the book a little "spice" and makesstory furthermore.
    The most bizarre thing I noticed in the novel was,
    the characters seem more realistic.
    What did you find most bizarre?
    The
    sudden switch from one personchange between different people, and different scenes. The changes just seemed to the next,change at will, like there was no rhyme or reason for one page, then changing backthem to the original person, is very bizarre to me. I really do not think this would help the book.change. After seeing James (Main Character)the main character for 35 pages, then all of a sudden Lauren (James' sister)change to a sub character for half a page, really just seems, quite inconvenient.
    What
    page was most believable or unbelievable?
    The most unbelievable thing in the book was,
    quite strange.
    I must say that,
    basically the whole book, kids that are orphaned getting turned in to combat-trained soldiers/spies seems un-realistic to me. Especiallybook was unbelievable, especially the fact that,parts of the kids somehow, never get caught, even thoughbook where, after the worldmain character being seen by 6 different people, all of a sudden he is so technologically advanced that, sooner or later, something such asable to disappear, to me, with the campus, ortechnology we had back between 2006-2007, I think the people, will be found, and then thereUnited States would be a raid ofhave found the secret campus, or the person would be heavily looked for.
    Would your recommend this book to any one? Why or why not?
    several years before 2007.
    I would
    ...
    book to any one. Unlessanyone. The reason being because unless the person is a very intellectual person,smart, and likesdoes not like reading books with big words/more detailed moments inmeant for teens to young adults, the book, then I wouldbook is quite amusing, and not recommend this to any one.only about serious issues. The booknovel is very easy to
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    the speech in the novel is not thattoo hard to
    ...
    and the story linestoryline is very interesting, and easy to pick up. Theinteresting. But the book is also,also not too kiddy-like for a older person to little-kiddishlike reading.
    I will definitely read more novels by Robert Muchamore, especially since this novel is smack in the middle of a series of books. This book also greatly appeals to my thirst
    for an adult-teen levelaction, suspense, crime, and fighting. One of the immediate, and easiest genres to find, is the action/fighting genre, because the initial 5 pages are about the main character, and his training session in the Dojo on the campus.
    Thanks for
    reading.
    Will you read any more novels by this author?
    Yes, I will read more of the novels by Robert Muchamore. The book appeals to my thrill for, action, suspense, and sci-fi. Some of these are detail's are quite obvious, such as during the very beginning of the book, where James has to battle many people just to get over the initial problem. This is obviously, action/fighting.
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  2. page Novel Study Focus Assignment edited ... Novel Study Focus Assignment - My Reaction By Rory Christopher ... association (The survi…
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    Novel Study Focus Assignment - My Reaction
    By Rory Christopher
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    association (The survivors),Survivors), connected to
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    secret organization, but is a bad organization, that is trying to .destroy the world). The organization
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    the Survivors. This
    This
    is my
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    the book, somemost of the
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    is very well-written, but some of the book is quite poor, somewell-written. Some of the
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    did like, arewere the fact
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    book is very detailed in
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    mission briefings.
    What
    The plot twists are the Goodamazing, you think you know what is going to happen then, BANG plot totally changes and bad pointsyou were totally wrong about your novelwhat was going to happen. Some of the things, I did not like about the book was, the language is not very complex, and why?
    The language is not very complex in most points of the book: Bad
    The story is easy to follow, and interesting : Good
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  3. page Novel Study Focus Assignment edited Novel Study Focus Assignment - My Reaction By Rory Christopher ... to infiltrate a secret …

    Novel Study Focus Assignment - My Reaction
    By Rory Christopher
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    to infiltrate a secret association (The survivors), connected to Help Earth (another secret organization, trying to . The organization Help Earth, is a terrorist group that thinks, killing people/resources most people need to survive, will help the world, even if the people are always working full-time, or the resources are used every day. James is hoping, that he can find out whether or not Help Earth is linked to the Survivors. This is my reaction to the book, some of the book is very well-written, but some of the book is quite poor, some of the features of the book, that I did like, are the fact that there is a variety of different characters, the book is very detailed in most parts, especially the mission briefings.
    What are the Good and bad points about your novel and why?
    The language is not very complex in most points of the book: Bad
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  4. page Novel Study Focus Assignment edited Novel Study Focus Assignment - My Reaction By Rory Christopher The name of this novel is Divine …
    Novel Study Focus Assignment - My Reaction
    By Rory Christopher
    The name of this novel is Divine Madness, by Robert Muchamore. The plot outline for the story is, James Adams (the main character) is trying to infiltrate

    What are the Good and bad points about your novel and why?
    The language is not very complex in most points of the book: Bad
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  5. page Novel Study Focus Assignment edited ... and why? The The language is ... in most points: points of the book: Bad The The…
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    and why? The
    The
    language is
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    in most points:points of the book: Bad The
    The
    story is
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    : Good Transitions
    Transitions
    to different
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    book are not great:sketchy: Bad Very
    Very
    detailed in
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    book: Good Very
    Very
    nice &
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    twists: Good Variety
    Variety
    of different
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    any way? No,
    No,
    this novel
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    the novel? Just
    Just
    like the
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    most interesting? What
    What
    I find
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    most bizarre? The
    The
    sudden switch
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    or unbelievable? The
    The
    most unbelievable
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    book was, the basically the
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    to combat-trained and well skilled with every aspect of lifesoldiers/spies seems un-realistic
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    will be found out about,found, and then
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    why not? I
    I
    would definitely
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    this author? Yes,
    Yes,
    I will
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Tuesday, January 11

  1. page Novel Study Focus Assignment edited What are the Good and bad points about your novel and why? The language is not very complex in most…
    What are the Good and bad points about your novel and why? The language is not very complex in most points: Bad The story is easy to follow, and interesting : Good Transitions to different people in the book are not great: Bad Very detailed in most parts of the book: Good Very nice & interesting plot twists: Good Variety of different characters: Good
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    any way? No, this novel did not, it does not have a main theme, or a moral. None of the characters try to teach anyone first hand how to fix, clean, make, etc. anything. And since the novel has no moral, message, or main theme, the book does not have anything to teach you afterwards.
    Did you
    ...
    the novel?
    What
    Just like the answer above, none of the characters try to teach anyone first hand how to fix, clean, make, etc. anything.
    What
    did you
    ...
    most interesting? What I find most interesting is, the plot twists, and the characters. The plot twists distort the story, making it harder to solve. Which I love. The characters, are all different, even if just being in a small way. But it gives the book a little "spice" and makes the characters seem more realistic.
    What did
    ...
    most bizarre? The sudden switch from one person to the next, for one page, then changing back to the original person, is very bizarre to me. I really do not think this would help the book. After seeing James (Main Character) for 3 pages, then all of a sudden Lauren (James' sister) for half a page, really just seems, quite inconvenient.
    What was
    ...
    or unbelievable?
    Would
    The most unbelievable thing in the book was, the basically the whole book, kids that are orphaned getting turned in to combat-trained and well skilled with every aspect of life seems un-realistic to me. Especially the fact that, the kids somehow, never get caught, even though the world is so technologically advanced that, sooner or later, something such as the campus, or the people, will be found out about, and then there would be a raid of the campus, or the person would be heavily looked for.
    Would
    your recommend
    ...
    to any one?Whyone? Why or why not?
    Will
    I would definitely recommend this book to any one. Unless the person is a very intellectual person, and likes reading books with big words/more detailed moments in the book, then I would not recommend this to any one. The book is easy to follow, the speech in the novel is not that hard to comprehend, and the story line is very interesting, and easy to pick up. The book is also, not to little-kiddish for an adult-teen level of reading.
    Will
    you will read any more novels by this author? Yes, I will read more of the novels by Robert Muchamore. The book appeals to my thrill for, action, suspense, and sci-fi. Some of these are detail's are quite obvious, such as during the very beginning of the book, where James has to battle many people just to get over the initial problem. This is obviously, action/fighting.
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    Divine Madness by Robert Muchamore
    Book read. Date: Tuesday, January 11th, 2011
    So far, the plot of the story is about getting out of the Ark alive, for Rat, James Adams and Lauren Adams. The plot for Dana right now is, trying to take over the boat she is traveling in through the Indonesian sea. James, Rat, and Lauren have been enclosed in a room, with 6 other little children age 1-10. Dana on the other hand, is stuck on a boat, feeling very “nervous” about the challenge ahead for her, she has been going to the bathroom to get various tools. In the end, everyone gets out alive. Lauren earns a black shirt, the highest shirt you can get. Dana is shot in the toe, after getting in a fight with the woman on the boat.
    You are never told who is telling the story, it may have just been in a 3rd person format for the purpose to switch between characters more easily. This does change how the story is being told, because you do not see the world through the main character’s eyes. Which changes how everything is placed, and how the people think.
    The climax of the novel is when, James is feeling bad for himself, after he stepped in to a large sewage tank, and did not notice a barge that would have let him walk across the whole tank, without falling in to the sewage. All of a sudden, The Ark explodes, and James blacks out, later we learn that about 80-90% of the people in the Ark have died. Also another climax possibility is when, Dana is fighting to lady on the boat, and she is shot in the foot, and the woman and Barry Cox are both tied up.
    There does not seem to be a main theme or message, this may be because, the novel was not intended to have a lesson that teaches anyone anything. The author I am guessing, just wanted to write a series about people that are well-taught in combat training, and fitness tests every once in a while.

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